My Writing I'm working on. By Rico!

Hi everyone this Is my unfinished writing that I have been working on. We had to write a story about the picture here and the writing In Red Is mine. Blog Ya Later!

There I am,  on an icy cold Alien planet. I was on a mission to Investigate on an Alien Planet called XYZ. But all the Aliens are gone because they evacuated before there planet blew up so now I am trapped on this planet. Sooner or later It will blow up. But something catches my eye, something like a little Rectangle like pod the shape of a car. I start to run but the snow Is really thick and I stumble.